personel poem

موضوع: personel poem الثلاثاء مارس 30, 2010 1:21 pm

in god i am thinking
arround me,i was looking
what i saw,i was noting
in my heart i am writing
the wars were spreading
peoples were suffering
their homes were beseting
thier hearts were burning
their hopes were bursting
their bodies were bleeding
their brinds were freezing
against the ennemy they were fighting
to the freedom they were creeping
in god they were clinging
and just for him they were praying
to only him they were kneeling
despite their dreams were staving
and their childs were striking
and their lovers were killing
to their independance they were waiting
this is all what i was seeing
in a film of the way of living
in the countries wich were colonizing
fortunatlly they had happy ending
the war was finishinf
for minutes i was smiling
unfortunatli it was the ebd of what i was dreaming
in my short sleaping
i hoped that in this dream end we are living

موضوع: رد: personel poem السبت أغسطس 14, 2010 9:53 am

thank you good jop

موضوع: رد: personel poem السبت أغسطس 14, 2010 4:21 pm

wow it verry good poem i don't beleive that you wrote that
you fasinate me im in chok right now
and im waiting for another peace of art like this from you
thank you houda

موضوع: رد: personel poem السبت أغسطس 14, 2010 5:00 pm

it's not me who wrote this poem ,she was my cousin personel poem Icon_biggrin

and i have wrote the poem "the way of jay".
thanks anyway.

موضوع: رد: personel poem السبت أغسطس 14, 2010 9:29 pm

موضوع: رد: personel poem الأحد أغسطس 15, 2010 1:32 am